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October 7, 2015

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wrinkles in time, a poem

by Gradmama2011

[Writing 201: Poetry, Day Three — Skin, Prose Poetry, Internal Rhyme]

      rhythm and flow and here we go–gathering information and seeking inspiration

              Wrinkles in Time

Once her skin was smooth and soft

inviting a lover’s touch…

Now her arms recall the delight of it all

as the feeling  of warm fingers still lingers

erasing the wrinkles in time.

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28 Comments Post a comment
  1. Oct 7 2015

    A tender, wistful poem! Beautiful.

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  2. Oct 7 2015

    Tender and wistful? Yeah, I guess. But as I was reading I was thinking, yep, that’s exactly how it is. That’s reality. Well done. I can SO relate!

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  3. Oct 7 2015

    This is fantastic!

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  4. Oct 7 2015

    Nice one. Thanks for sharing.

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    • Oct 7 2015

      I’m glad you enjoyed my poem.

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    • Oct 7 2015

      do you have an url for your blog?

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      • Oct 7 2015

        Pedrognunez.wordpress.com. I hope this is what you are asking for.

      • Oct 7 2015

        I’ll try it, the first I tried didn’t go anywhere.

  5. Oct 7 2015

    Please try this one:

    pedrognunez.wordpress.com

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    • Oct 7 2015

      I did get through, and enjoy your site…I want to get back and see your photos. I am following now. 🙂

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  6. Vibrant
    Oct 7 2015

    Wow!!

    The poem is wonderful. Though the picture goes to say otherwise.

    Thanks for sharing!

    More love and light ❤

    Anand 🙂

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    • Oct 7 2015

      that is a picture I took that is the sun through my back deck top…I liked it a lot. Thanks for commenting on the poem.

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      • Vibrant
        Oct 7 2015

        I feel picture is nice though theme of the poem is that of sadness an nostalgia. Cheers!

      • Oct 7 2015

        the picture really has nothing to do with the poem, its the header image of the blog. The assignment for the poem was “skin” and the style prose-poetry and internal rhyme . I do enjoy writing poetry.

  7. Oct 7 2015

    Beautifully….sensitively crafted! 😉

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  8. Oct 8 2015

    Awesome! Doesn’t need a picture…

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  9. Oct 8 2015

    This is touching. I’d say, excuse the pun except that actual touching is important, here. Recalling delight removes time’s wrinkles. Words wonderful for life, unlike the lessons that subliminally affect us. Thanks for your wisdom!

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    • Oct 8 2015

      how kind of you to say so … I love that you got what I was trying to say, thanks for elaborating.

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  10. Oct 8 2015

    You are a very talented writer!

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    • Oct 8 2015

      thank you for that. I have never really written poetry, and I love it… 😊

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  11. Oct 29 2015

    A wistful daydream *sigh*

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