wrinkles in time, a poem
[Writing 201: Poetry, Day Three — Skin, Prose Poetry, Internal Rhyme]
rhythm and flow and here we go–gathering information and seeking inspiration
Wrinkles in Time
Once her skin was smooth and soft
inviting a lover’s touch…
Now her arms recall the delight of it all
as the feeling of warm fingers still lingers
erasing the wrinkles in time.
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A tender, wistful poem! Beautiful.
thanks for commenting that, glad you liked it.
A pleasure!
Tender and wistful? Yeah, I guess. But as I was reading I was thinking, yep, that’s exactly how it is. That’s reality. Well done. I can SO relate!
thanks, it is real all right…:-)
This is fantastic!
thank you so much…its fun writing poetry
Nice one. Thanks for sharing.
I’m glad you enjoyed my poem.
do you have an url for your blog?
Pedrognunez.wordpress.com. I hope this is what you are asking for.
I’ll try it, the first I tried didn’t go anywhere.
Please try this one:
pedrognunez.wordpress.com
I did get through, and enjoy your site…I want to get back and see your photos. I am following now. 🙂
Wow!!
The poem is wonderful. Though the picture goes to say otherwise.
Thanks for sharing!
More love and light ❤
Anand 🙂
that is a picture I took that is the sun through my back deck top…I liked it a lot. Thanks for commenting on the poem.
I feel picture is nice though theme of the poem is that of sadness an nostalgia. Cheers!
the picture really has nothing to do with the poem, its the header image of the blog. The assignment for the poem was “skin” and the style prose-poetry and internal rhyme . I do enjoy writing poetry.
Beautifully….sensitively crafted! 😉
I appreciate that…I try. 🙂
Awesome! Doesn’t need a picture…
thanks Maddy, nice to see you.
This is touching. I’d say, excuse the pun except that actual touching is important, here. Recalling delight removes time’s wrinkles. Words wonderful for life, unlike the lessons that subliminally affect us. Thanks for your wisdom!
how kind of you to say so … I love that you got what I was trying to say, thanks for elaborating.
You are a very talented writer!
thank you for that. I have never really written poetry, and I love it… 😊
A wistful daydream *sigh*
I know… thanks for commenting.